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A reimagined One Health framework for wildlife conservation

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  16 March 2023

A response to the following question: One Health most often has people as the primary beneficiary. How must One Health policies and practice change to make animal, plant and ecosystem health a primary focus that is influenced by human and environmental factors?

Craig Stephen*
Affiliation:
McEachran Institute, Nanoose Bay, Canada
Alana Wilcox
Affiliation:
Ecotoxicology and Wildlife Health Division, Environment and Climate Change Canada, Ottawa, Canada
Sarah Sine
Affiliation:
Ecotoxicology and Wildlife Health Division, Environment and Climate Change Canada, Ottawa, Canada
Jennifer Provencher
Affiliation:
Ecotoxicology and Wildlife Health Division, Environment and Climate Change Canada, Ottawa, Canada
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Author for correspondence: Craig Stephen, Email: craigstephen.pes@gmail.com
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Abstract

The One Health discourse is dominated by the role of animal health as a determinant of human health. This discourse often disregards the intrinsic and ecological value of healthy animals and is thus an inadequate framing for wildlife conservation. Our paper reimagines One Health for conservation purposes based on five premises: (i) health is cumulative; (ii) there are multiple species with different health needs and goals in the same setting; (iii) One Health emphasizes “bundled” relationships unique to a setting, rather than independent and intersecting spheres of health; and One Health should be (iv) equity informed and (v) have a shared goal that can be achieved through intersectoral actions. The reimagined framework is centered on the guiding principle that all actions should ensure no species or generation is prevented from reaching good health by the actions to protect other species or generations. Grounded in the positive outcome of health equity, the framework uses three prompts to guide One Health planning – populations, places and goals. The paper discusses how the framework can be applied for research concerning wood bison herds under imminent threat in Canada.

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Introduction

One Health emerged as a framework in the early 2000s to promote intersectoral action between human, animal and ecosystem health sectors. Intersectoral action refers to the way in which different sectors (i.e., government agencies, nongovernmental organizations and stakeholders) work together to improve the conditions that shape health. Intersectoral actions are needed when (i) programs are unable to address health challenges on their own; (ii) to improve coherence in addressing health challenges across sectors; and (iii) to increase and mobilize resources dedicated to improving health (WHO, 2018). To date, most One Health intersectoral action has been done to address proximate human health risks and needs, such as zoonotic disease management and food security (Gallagher et al., Reference Gallagher, Keehner, Hervé-Claude and Stephen2021). While conceptually One Health does not centralize one sphere (i.e., human, animal, or ecosystem health) over the other, the approach has come under scrutiny for its anthropogenic focus and failures to adequately attend to nonhuman well-being (Ferdowsian, Reference Ferdowsian2021). One Health has principally aimed to manage animal health not for the moral and ecological value of healthy wild animal populations, but rather the extent that poor animal health affects human health and well-being (Bhakuni, Reference Bhakuni2021). As a result, the predominantly human-centric focus of One Health efforts can fail to realize a goal of health co-benefits across species and generations.

The preoccupation of One Health on zoonotic diseases for public health purposes has led to an emphasis on epidemiological approaches instead of socio-ecological systems approaches in research and practice (Gallagher et al., Reference Gallagher, Keehner, Hervé-Claude and Stephen2021). Putting people at the top of a hierarchy of human, animal and environment health has resulted in suggestions that One Health reproduces a western-centric biomedical epistemology, rather than enabling novel intersectoral action on the interdependencies between human, animal and environmental health (Davis and Sharp, Reference Davis and Sharp2020). Therefore, there is a need to reimagine One Health thinking for wildlife conservation by bringing a holistic socio-ecological framing to the forefront of a One Health discussion. Here we explore how we can transform the dominant human-centric One Health framing to use One Health within a wildlife conservation landscape.

Context for method development

We undertook the development of the framework presented in this paper as part of an effort to address a critical need to reimagine One Health for an intersectoral approach for the purposes of Species At Risk (SAR) conservation in Canada. There are several species at risk in Canada where health in combination with habitat degradation in identified as the leading conservation concerns. For example, wood bison (Bison bison athabascae) are classified as threatened under the Canadian Species at Risk Act (SARA; ECCC, 2018). Species management efforts have largely focused on the creation, protection and augmentation of herds within the historic wood bison range that are free of bovine tuberculosis and brucellosis (Shury et al., Reference Shoreman-Ouimet and Kopnina2015). In 2021, two disease-free herds were classified as being under imminent threat due to their small population size; threats of habitat alteration due to hydroelectric generation, oil and gas exploration and forestry; potential exposure to contaminants from oil extraction processes; proximity to a herd infected with bovine tuberculosis and brucellosis; and unregulated hunting (ECCC, 2020).

Alongside the requirement to respond to the SARA listing for species like wood bison is the essential need to conduct conservation work in a manner that supports reconciliation with Indigenous peoples in Canada, who have legal rights to a healthy, sustained environment and wildlife, as detailed in the Canadian Constitution (e.g., Section 35, rights to wildlife harvest), SARA (Section 53, consultation), and the UN resolution recognizing a healthy environment is a human right (United Nations Development Programme, Reference Stephen and Stephen2022; United Nations Digital Library, 2022). At the same time, Canadian federal conservation agencies are being encouraged to apply One Health thinking to their work. These are currently driving factors shaping the conservation approaches for wood bison with partners and within a larger ecological context.

A zoonotic disease-focused One Health approach inadequately reflects the interacting challenges confronting at-risk species, such as the wood bison herds under imminent threat, as the current model lacks an operational framework to develop or communicate socially acceptable management plans that account for interacting human, ecosystem and wildlife health in the same geographic location. Below, we reimagine a conceptual framework for One Health with a conservation focus that is applicable across a range of species and ecosystems in Canada.

Method development

Core premises leading to the framework

Premise 1 – Health is the cumulative effect of social and ecological determinants that create threats, susceptibilities, resources and capacities that determine how well an individual, population or system can cope with its lived reality (Stephen, 2022). The term health is often undefined or not uniformly applied in wildlife health or One Health, leading the recommendations for authors to provide their definition of health (Sinclair, Reference Shury, Nishi, Elkin and Wobeser2020, Wittrock et al., 2019). As such, we provide Figure 1 to establish our perspective of health as the term is used in this paper (Figure 1).

Figure 1. Conceptual model of wildlife health as a cumulative effect that changes over time and is unique to each context.

Determinants of health enable access to the resources for daily living and functioning, capacity to cope with change and stressors, and ability to meet human expectations (Stephen, 2022). It has been proposed that there are six broad categories of wildlife health determinants: (i) needs for daily living; (ii) interactions with the abiotic and biotic environments; (iii) interactions within the animals’ social environment; (iv) biological endowment; (v) direct mortality pressures; and (vi) human expectations and animal uses (Wittrock et al., 2019). The relative contributions of these determinants change over the life course of an animal and will be different for different species and/or situations. Table 1 provides some illustrative examples of factors influencing each category of health determinants for wildlife health, using wood bison as an example.

Table 1. Illustrative examples of factors influencing wood bison’s determinants of health (see Wittrock et al. (2019) for the Determinants of Health Conceptual Model for Wildlife Health)

Premise 2 – There is not one health, but multiple types of health in one setting.

In every socio-ecological system, there is more than one species and more than one population. Each has its own unique requirements to be healthy, and each can be subject to different social expectations for their health. Therefore, there are multiple ways health can be measured, framed and experienced in the same setting.

The “One” in One Health can be taken to mean a single species (i.e., an anthropocentric bias) or that there is a single healthy setting shared by people and other organisms. The Ottawa Charter for Health Promotion states that health is created and lived within the settings of everyday life (WHO, 1986), forming the foundation for the healthy settings approach. The healthy settings approach applies whole system and multi-disciplinary methods that integrate action across risk factors and emphasizes strategies that contribute to health in particular settings rather than targeting specific at-risk groups. Healthy setting programs think about places, which are defined relationally, rather than spatially. A place is where organisms actively use and shape the environment and where health problems are created or solved (Roberston, 2021). A setting, on the other hand, involves the time, place and circumstances in which something lives. Settings-based approaches target the specific circumstances of a place and engage with local issues and opportunities that are driven by complex, intersecting factors, requiring a cross-sectoral response (State Government of Victoria, Reference Sinclair2020). The goal is to combine knowledge, policies and resources to make the setting healthier for all that live there, rather than addressing risks to only one group in a space shared with others. In the context of conservation, this requires One Health to use a holistic ecosystem approach which considers the wildlife, the environment, people and the historical and current setting.

Premise 3 – The model of One Health as overlapping spheres inadequately reflects how human, animal and environmental health interrelate.

The usual One Health visual representation delineates human, animal and environmental health as distinct entities that overlap on a sub-set of issues (e.g. zoonoses), rather than an entangled assemblage of interactions of determinants of health (Davis and Sharp, Reference Davis and Sharp2020). The usual presentation of overlapping spheres suggests an unproblematic alignment of three sets of interests that are typically treated and managed separately. Separating them into three different categories of health rather than one, interconnected health can allow for one type of health (i.e., usually human) to overwhelm other types.

Instead of distinct spheres that overlap on some issues, conceiving One Health as an assemblage allows one to think about the ways human, animal and environmental health are “bundled” in distinctive social, behavioral, ecological and biological relationships unique to a setting. Operationalizing One Health, specifically when conservation of ecosystems is a central tenet, requires recognition that the bundles are messy and not discrete, and the consideration of linked health needs requires an analytical framework that is also complex and can accommodate bundles of information.

Premise 4 – One Health should be equity informed.

Equity is about treating things justly according to their circumstances. Health equity exists when there is fair access to the resources and opportunities needed for health. Actualizing the ideal of One Health necessitates a focus on interspecies and intergenerational health equity. Health equity, from a One Health perspective, should ensure that all species and generations can reach their full health potential and are not disadvantaged from attaining it because of efforts to protect the health of one group in the current generation. The net gains in human well-being in the past two generations have come at the cost of degraded ecosystems and diminished access to their benefits by future generations and other species (Lee and Diop, Reference Wittrock, Duncan and Stephen2009). Promoting human health at the expense of other species, ecosystems or generations resemble colonial and racial inequalities in which one group prospers at the expense of the other (Shoreman-Ouimet and Kopnina, Reference Roberston and Stephen2015) and have resulted in substantial and largely irreversible interruptions in the flow and sustainability of ecosystem services that are determinants of health equity.

Understanding and managing health from an interspecies point of view calls for the awareness of similarities and differences between the need of different living things in the same setting. Health equity and ecological justice in One Health ask how we should include the interests of nonhumans in One Health policies and programs. Ecological justice requires respect for the entitlements of human and nonhuman beings, as well as just relationships within and between species (Bhakuni, Reference Bhakuni2021). The related concepts of equity and ecological justice may provide the common ground needed to bring coherence to One Health various roles in identifying, preventing and mitigating health risk and in positively influencing social and ecological conditions that keep things well (Nieuwland, Reference Lee and Diop2020). These ideas are critical in a conservation context given rights to harvest in both the Canadian Constitution and SAR legislation.

Premise 5 – Intersectoral actions need a shared goal.

Effective collaborations for health are more likely when participants have a clearly stated purpose based on shared values and interests (PHAC, 2016). At times, the interests in One Health conflict, such as when public health practitioners advocate for the extermination of an animal host of an epidemic zoonotic pathogen, or when conservationists advocate for the end of the wildlife trade without acknowledging the critical contribution to household income and food security the trade provides its participants. Clear objectives and identified co-benefits among partners enable effective intersectoral action (WHO, 2018).

Agencies established to conserve wild species can quickly become overwhelmed. Many of the drivers of conservation are found outside of the legislated scope of conservation agencies (e.g., zoonoses from agriculture, pollution regulation, habitat degradation on lands beyond their jurisdiction). Therefore, partnerships are essential. In the wood bison case study, there are three prevailing objectives: (1) sustained human use of natural resources for social benefits; (2) sustained ecosystem services; and (3) wood bison herds that can adapt to changing conditions and be sustained on the land (Figure 2). Effective solutions need multi-sectoral coordination, collaboration and engagement to find shared paths forward despite different goals and values. To facilitate intersectoral actions for species of conservation concern, One Health programs will need to identify, understand and manage issues that cut across multiple program goals. One Health programs need to function in ways that avoid creating or contributing to health inequities or limit potential to achieve complex interacting goals. They must support collaborations on solutions that lead to win-win-win scenarios for human, animal and ecosystem health.

Figure 2. Goals (circles) and some issues surrounding them in the socio-ecological system of two wood bison herds in Alberta, Canada.

Draft One Health framework for intersectoral action in wildlife conservation

The reimagined One Health framework is depicted in Figure 3. In the center is the guiding equity principle that actions should ensure that the protection of one species or generation does not have detrimental effects on the health of another species or generation. To accomplish this, the framework emphasizes health equity for human, animal and environment health. Around those goals are the three prompts for One Health guiding questions: populations, places and goals (Table 2).

Figure 3. Equity informed One Health framework for conservation.

Table 2. Guiding One Health questions

Around the three prompts are six action themes:

  1. 1. Goals

    1. a. Using participatory means to develop a shared understanding of cross-sectoral and shared goals.

    2. b. Mediating conflicts in goals by identifying entry points into problem-solving that promote collective action on collective goals.

  2. 2. Places

    1. a. Enabling the local situations that are conducive to reach health goals in this place.

    2. b. Sustaining the relationship, resources and capacities to promote health-conducive settings.

  3. 3. Populations

    1. a. Empowering living entities to secure their needs for health by providing and protecting their determinants of health in an equitable manner.

    2. b. Advocating for all human and nonhuman populations in the area to ensure unintended negative impacts on one population’s health does not arise when producing positive impacts on another population.

These goals, prompts and themes are embedded in a reminder that decisions and information are specific to a setting and that the intent is to produce co-benefits by working together across sectors to address multiple problems with complementary programs, policies and investments.

Method application

The proposed framework provides a conceptual foundation for researchers working on a sustainable conservation strategy for wildlife, such as the two wood bison herds under imminent threat (Table 3). The goal of the reimagined One Health framework will be to prompt inquiries to improve coherence and collaboration in addressing health challenges across agriculture, Indigenous well-being, public health and conservation sectors and find ways to increase and mobilize resources to address SAR conservation challenges. The framework will also provide a common vision for research and actions that work towards co-benefit for the sectors (Figure 2), with the long-term conservation of wildlife grounding the work with partners. By situating places, goals and populations in a shared setting, the framework will remind the research team to think in a settings-based, systems perspective, rather than the traditional One Health Venn diagram which places emphasis on overlaps between health sectors on an issue-by-issue basis, excluding the majority of lived experiences of people, animals and ecosystems.

Table 3. Establishing the relevance of the One Health framework to wood bison herds under imminent threat

The framework will be used as a communication tool when explaining the projects’ objectives for setting-based conservation and to seek common interests on shared determinants of health that might produce co-benefits. It will help to show the objectives of the One Health approach the team is using (focused on shared goals in a shared place) rather than the more usual approach of animal or environmental management principally to benefit people.

The research team will adaptively refine the framework to help them identify conservation strategies that produce co-benefits while meeting species management goals and to better communicate their research strategy and recommendations to stakeholders and senior government officials. More specifically, lessons learned from a wood bison test case will be used to adapt the One Health for conservation framework for ongoing wood bison management and for applications to other species and conservation situations.

Financial support

This work was supported by a contract to the primary author (CS) from Environment and Climate Change Canada.

Conflict of interest

The authors have no conflicts of interest

Data availability

All data used for this project were extracted from literature sources cited in the reference section of this paper.

Author contributions

CS drafted the initial framework based on the management needs expressed by JP and AW and by a literature review to develop the foundational premises. SS conducted a background literature review to provide context for the bison health situation within determinants of health context. All authors reviewed and refined the final framework.

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Figure 1. Conceptual model of wildlife health as a cumulative effect that changes over time and is unique to each context.

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Table 1. Illustrative examples of factors influencing wood bison’s determinants of health (see Wittrock et al. (2019) for the Determinants of Health Conceptual Model for Wildlife Health)

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Figure 2. Goals (circles) and some issues surrounding them in the socio-ecological system of two wood bison herds in Alberta, Canada.

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Figure 3. Equity informed One Health framework for conservation.

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Table 2. Guiding One Health questions

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Table 3. Establishing the relevance of the One Health framework to wood bison herds under imminent threat

Author comment: A reimagined One Health framework for wildlife conservation - R0/PR1

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Review: A reimagined One Health framework for wildlife conservation - R0/PR2

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Comments

Comments to Author: Summary:This manuscript presented a refreshing approach to thinking about One Health problems. The central theme that One Health tends to be dominated by anthropocentric outcomes is a message that I believe is well made. I believe that the framework described is both needed, and represents what could be a very useful way of approaching many real-world conservation problems.That said, I did not find the narrative strong. I have highlighted a few small issues below. In general individual sentences seemed eloquently written and it is the overall structure that would benefit from thinking through. I had thought that the wood bison story was going to tie together the whole paper, but in the end there was not much written about the bison. It seemed inconsistent to discuss this example under premises 1 and 5, and yet not refer to them at all under premises 2-4. The wood bison story seems one that could be very well used to tie a useful paper together, but this narrative has not yet been thoroughly developed.Similarly, there were some potentially useful figures and tables which had not yet been fully exploited. Given the merits of the described way of thinking, I would be very supportive of seeing a version of this in print. My recommendation would be for a re-working to make the narrative far clearer in order to link together the various sections and to make maximal use of both the worked-example and of the figures.Abstract line 5: “….as a determinant of human health.” Needs one word adding.IntroductionLine 20 : Difference/differentLine 32: add “the”…. As a result, the predominantly....”Lines 39-41: Although I don’t think that the conservation medicine discipline does what you want , any more so than the One Health discipline does, I wonder if making a brief comparison would strengthen your argument for this framework. The world only needs so many frameworks and so a clear reason why that way of thinking is not sufficient would be useful.Line 56: add “of”…. “for the two herds of wood bison,…”Lines 57 and 203: I’m not sure; does “Indigenous” need to be capitalised?Line 59: I suspect, but am not sure, that you want an “e.g.” rather than an “i.e.”?Lines 63-66: This sentence would benefit from some editing to improve readability. It is rather convoluted presently. No problem with the sentiment, just the phrasing.Method DevelopmentLine 71: Change “systems” to “system”.Line 72: Capitalise “Figure”Table 1: Distinguish column headings from column contents (e.g. bold text)Table 1: Given that this table is a worked example of Wittrock et al.’s framework it would only seem fair to acknowledge those authors in the table legend (in addition to lines 74-8).Table 1: “Herd performance” seems vague to me, in what context?Figure 1: Whilst I can see merit in this figure, I do not currently think that it is currently supporting the text where it is referred to (line 72), nor of stand-alone value. This figure could be valuable, but I would recommend more discussion of the figure in the text, or remove it entirely.Line 110: Is this meant to be “e.g.”?Line 119: My understanding is that “discreet” means unobtrusive and “discrete” is separate. I think that you want the latter. But I was not invited to review as a linguist!Lines 127-9: Whilst I don’t disagree with this sentiment, some examples/references would make this a stronger argument in a piece of scientific writing.Line 141: Change “needs” to “need”Line 158: Delete “leadings”Figure 2: Similar to my Figure 1 comment. I don’t think that there is enough accompanying explanation to make maximal use of this figure.Draft FrameworkLines 165-7: “In the centre…..species or generation”. The phrasing of the second half of this sentence could be edited to improve clarity.Lines 167-169: “The commonality……or a harm.”. This sentence also needs clarifying.Table 2: As Table 1 – distinguish column headings.Table 2: Change “overlaps” to “overlap”Method ApplicationLine 202: Is “inquires” meant to be “inquirers”?Line 211 Apostrophe needed in “projects”References:Lines 104 and 245: Given that you cite the Government of Canada (line 257), can the “Anon” reference not better be attributed to the Government of Australia?Are websites referenced according to journal guidelines, eg lines 257, 263?

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Comments

Comments to Author: This is a well-formulated, ethically-considered, place-based One Health framework and I recommend it be published, pending minor edits. While I appreciate that the framework is location-specific, I can see how it might be modified or tailored and adopted in other locations, so I think it also has more general applicability and is thus likely to inspire other frameworks in the realm of wildlife conservation. My mostly minor comments and suggestions are as follows. Line 55 / paragraph spanning lines 44-55: Authors might consider making a case here for how One Health, being intersectoral, is a suitable approach to addressing varied and cumulative effects on wildlife (by cumulative effects, I mean the way this term is used here: https://wildlife.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1002/jwmg.22094) Line 56: Insert “of” between two herds and wood bisonLines 59-60: Authors may also wish to mention the new UN resolution on the human right to a healthy environmentLine 99: Re: Healthy settings programs, any parallels with healthy country planning that might be worth making here?Line 104: “polices” should be “policies”Line 115: Re: “Conceiving One Health as an assemblage” indeed food web approaches seem to be on the rise in the realm of One Health; I encourage authors to see this recent example, which may be worth citing, wherein the Eurasian boar was found to be the most connected and central sp. in Europe: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2352771422001112Lines 156-157: Suggest rephrasing this sentence for clarity, e.g., One Health programs need to function in ways that avoid creating or contributing to health inequities or limit potential to achieve complex interacting goals.Line 158: delete “leadings”Line 160, Figure 2 heading: some “issues” (make “issue” plural)Table 2: “overlaps” should be “overlap” in “Where do enablers or impediments to meeting goals overlaps between animal, human and environment sectors?”Line 189: Re: “population” – I assume the authors’ use of “population” applies to humans as well as also to other living entities, i.e., animals and plants? Can authors perhaps say what they mean when they say “population” to help the reader?Line 202: “inquires” should be “inquiries” Line 213: “focused” instead of “focussed”And finally, could the authors provide one specific example / context where they expect to use this framework in the near future?

Presentation

Overall score 4 out of 5
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Is the data presented in the most useful manner? (40%)
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Context

Overall score 5 out of 5
Does the title suitably represent the article? (25%)
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Does the abstract correctly embody the content of the article? (25%)
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Does the introduction give appropriate context and indicate the relevance of the results to the question or hypothesis under consideration? (25%)
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Is the objective of the experiment clearly defined? (25%)
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Results

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Decision: A reimagined One Health framework for wildlife conservation - R0/PR5

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The paper has been pending some time whilst appropriate reviewers were sought and obtained over the difficult seasonal period. This said the reviewers who accepted were both prompt once asked. This is not a technically challenging paper but its more philosophical aspects are very important to articulate at this stage in One Health evolution across sectors. The choice of examples to illustrate the points are appropriate in my opinion but there are criticism from the reviewers which need to be addressed and these are clear from the comments. Some revision therefore is needed for clarity and consistency of the arguments and to strengthen the justification for the conclusions made. We welcome a redraft with minor revisions.

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The paper has been appropriately revised to my satisfaction and can go forward.